又漏了進度，改到哪裡了?
我有寫進度阿~~
OK! My fault. For ease for understanding, you may move the verb "完成" to the beginning of the phrase because of the long noun "第1項謝老師修改的部份".The rest of revisions are still long way to go. Particularly, you didn't apply my revising principles to all tasks.
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又漏了進度，改到哪裡了?
我有寫進度阿~~
OK! My fault. For ease for understanding, you may move the verb "完成" to the beginning of the phrase because of the long noun "第1項謝老師修改的部份".
The rest of revisions are still long way to go. Particularly, you didn't apply my revising principles to all tasks.
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